name: apa-manuscript description: Academic manuscript writing and APA 7th edition formatting for psychology papers. Use when asked to write or edit Introduction, Method, Results, Discussion, or Abstract sections; format references; check APA style; suggest target journals; or draft Response to Reviewers letters. user-invocable: true
APA Manuscript Writing
This skill provides guidelines and templates for writing psychology manuscripts in APA 7th edition format.
Paper Structure
Title Page (APA 7th)
- Title: concise, descriptive (12 words or fewer)
- Author names and affiliations
- Author Note (ORCID, conflicts of interest, acknowledgements, correspondence)
- Running head is NOT required in APA 7th (removed)
Abstract (150-250 words)
Write last. Must be self-contained (readable without the paper). Structure: objective → participants/design → key measures → main results (with statistics) → conclusions.
Introduction Structure (Hourglass)
Broad topic context (2-3 paragraphs)
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Narrowing to specific research area
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Gap in existing literature / theoretical puzzle
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The present study: what was done and why
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Brief overview of hypotheses
Method Section
Must be detailed enough for exact replication. Standard subsections:
- Participants: N, demographics (M age, SD, % gender), recruitment source, inclusion/exclusion criteria, compensation, power analysis reference
- Design: type (e.g., "2 × 2 between-subjects factorial"), IVs and DVs
- Materials/Measures: each measure with citation, number of items, response scale, reliability in present sample (α = .xx)
- Procedure: step-by-step, present tense, passive voice acceptable
Results Section
- Report descriptive statistics first (means, SDs, correlations)
- Then hypothesis tests in the order of the hypotheses
- Use standard APA statistical reporting format (see below)
- Do NOT interpret results in this section
Discussion Structure (Inverted Hourglass)
Main findings summary (1 paragraph)
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Interpretation of each finding in relation to theory/hypotheses
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Comparison with prior literature
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Theoretical contributions
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Practical implications
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Limitations
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Future directions
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Conclusion (1 paragraph)
APA 7th Statistical Reporting Format
# t-test
t(58) = 3.24, p = .002, d = 0.84, 95% CI [0.31, 1.37]
# One-way ANOVA
F(2, 147) = 8.93, p < .001, η²p = .108, 90% CI [.032, .185]
# Correlation
r(98) = .43, p < .001, 95% CI [.27, .57]
# Chi-square
χ²(3, N = 200) = 7.82, p = .050, V = .20
# Regression (reporting each predictor)
b = 0.34, SE = 0.08, β = .42, t(97) = 4.25, p < .001
# Mixed ANOVA interaction
F(1, 58) = 12.3, p = .001, η²p = .175
Key rules:
- Never write "p = .000"; write "p < .001"
- Use leading zero for p values: "p = .023" (not "p = .23")
- No leading zero for numbers that cannot exceed 1: "r = .43" (not "r = 0.43")
- Two decimal places for most statistics; three for p values
- Report exact p values unless p < .001
- Always report effect sizes and confidence intervals
- Italicize statistical symbols: t, F, p, r, N, n, M, SD
Reference List Format (APA 7th)
Journal article (with DOI)
Author, A. A., & Author, B. B. (Year). Title of article. *Journal Name*, *Volume*(Issue), page–page. https://doi.org/xxxxx
Journal article (DOI as URL)
All DOIs should be formatted as URLs: https://doi.org/10.xxxx/xxxx
Book
Author, A. A. (Year). *Title of work: Capital letter also for subtitle* (edition, if not first). Publisher. https://doi.org/xxxxx
Chapter in edited book
Author, A. A. (Year). Title of chapter. In E. E. Editor (Ed.), *Title of book* (pp. xx–xx). Publisher.
In-text Citation Rules
- One author: (Smith, 2020)
- Two authors: (Smith & Jones, 2020) — always use "&" in parentheses
- Three or more authors: (Smith et al., 2020) — from first citation
- Direct quote: (Smith, 2020, p. 45)
Journal Selection Guide (Psychology)
Broad Journals (general psychology)
- Psychological Science (IF ~7) — short empirical papers, high impact
- JPSP (IF ~7) — social/personality, longer papers
- JEP: General (IF ~7) — experimental, broader scope
- Perspectives on Psychological Science — reviews and conceptual pieces
Methods/Quantitative
- Psychological Methods — statistical methodology
- Behavior Research Methods — empirical methods papers
Open Access / Registered Reports
- PLOS ONE — open access, broad scope
- Collabra: Psychology — open access, supports RRs
- Advances in Methods and Practices in Psychological Science — open science focus
Chinese Journal Context
- 心理学报 — top Chinese psychology journal
- 心理科学 — broader scope
- 中国临床心理学杂志 — clinical focus
Response to Reviewers Template
# Response to Reviewers
Manuscript: [Title]
Journal: [Journal Name]
We thank the reviewers for their thoughtful and constructive feedback. Below we address each comment in turn. Reviewer comments are in **bold**, our responses follow.
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## Reviewer 1
**Comment 1.1:** [Reviewer's comment]
**Response:** We appreciate this concern. [Your response]. In the revised manuscript, we have [specific changes made, with page/line references].
> [Quote the revised text if applicable]
**Comment 1.2:** ...
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## Reviewer 2
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Notes
When drafting Results, always use statistics provided by 刑部 (代码分析司).
Never fabricate or estimate statistical values.
Mark missing values with: [PLACEHOLDER: 等待刑部数据]