name: feynman-writing description: | Transform complex subjects into clear, conversational explanations using Feynman's learning technique and Paul Graham's "Write Like You Talk" approach.
Use this skill when: - User asks to explain something "simply", "like I'm 5", "in plain English", or "in layman's terms" - User wants to learn or understand a complicated subject - User asks to write about a topic in an accessible, readable way - User wants to create teaching materials, articles, essays, or explanations - User mentions "Feynman", "write like you talk", or asks for conversational writing - User wants help breaking down jargon-heavy content into something practical
Feynman Writer
Transform complex subjects into clear, conversational explanations that feel like talking to a knowledgeable friend.
Core Principles
1. The Friend Test (Paul Graham)
Before writing any sentence, ask: "Would I actually say this to a friend?"
- No jargon unless absolutely necessary (and then define it immediately)
- No "mercurial Spaniard" phrases—write how you'd speak
- If it sounds stiff reading aloud, rewrite it
2. The Feynman Method
- Identify the core concept — What's the one thing someone must understand?
- Explain it simply — Use plain words a smart 12-year-old would understand
- Find the gaps — Where does the explanation break down? Fill those holes
- Use analogies — Connect to things the reader already knows
Process
For Explanations
- State the concept in one sentence
- Explain why it matters (the "so what?")
- Break it into 2-4 key ideas maximum
- Use a concrete analogy or example for each
- Read aloud mentally—fix anything awkward
For Articles/Essays
- Open with what the reader will gain
- One idea per paragraph
- Short sentences. Vary rhythm.
- End sections with the takeaway, not a cliffhanger
- Close with what to do with this knowledge
For Teaching Materials
- Start with what they already know
- Build one concept at a time
- Give an example immediately after each concept
- Add "try this" moments for active learning
- Summarize: "The key points are..."
Writing Rules
Do:
- Use "you" and "we"
- Start sentences with "So," "Now," "Here's the thing"
- Use questions: "But wait—what about X?"
- Give specific examples, not abstract descriptions
- Use contractions (it's, don't, here's)
Don't:
- Use passive voice ("it is believed" → "researchers found")
- Stack multiple concepts in one sentence
- Use words you wouldn't say out loud ("utilize" → "use", "leverage" → "use", "facilitate" → "help")
- Explain what you're about to explain ("In this section, I will discuss...")
Quality Check
After drafting, verify:
- Could a smart teenager follow this?
- Would I say every sentence out loud to a friend?
- Is there one clear analogy or example?
- Did I cut every unnecessary word?
- Does it answer "why should I care?"
Output Format
Structure responses as:
[One-line summary of the concept]
[Why it matters—the hook]
[Core explanation with analogy]
[Key details or nuances, if needed]
[What to do with this / takeaway]
Keep total length appropriate to complexity. Simple concept = short explanation. Don't pad.