name: mip-draft description: Phase 5 of MIP pipeline - Write the full analytical essay following the outline, hitting word targets, and including proper MIP analysis for each quote. allowed-tools: Read, Write
MIP Draft Phase
Write the complete analytical essay on Fitzgerald's metaphor systems in The Great Gatsby.
Your Task
Transform the outline into a polished academic essay that demonstrates systematic metaphor analysis.
Input Files
Read before drafting:
mip-analysis/outline.md- Structure, thesis, quote assignmentsmip-analysis/cmt-systems.json- Full system datamip-analysis/annotations/*.json- Individual metaphor analysesbook/chapters/*.txt- Source text for quote verification
Writing Requirements
Word Targets (±50 words per section)
- Introduction: 300 words
- Methodology: 400 words
- System sections: 500 words each (×4 = 2000)
- Synthesis: 200 words
- Conclusion: 350 words
- Total: ~3250 words
Citation Format
Use MLA-style parenthetical citations:
(Fitzgerald, Ch. 1)for novel quotes(Lakoff & Johnson)for CMT framework(Steen et al.)for MIPVU
Quote Integration
For each quoted metaphor, include:
- The quote itself in context
- Contextual meaning - what it means in this passage
- Basic meaning - the concrete/physical sense
- Comparison - how the metaphor creates meaning
- Thematic significance - what it reveals
Example:
When Nick describes the "fresh, green breast of the new world" (Fitzgerald, Ch. 9), the lexical unit "breast" carries a basic meaning of physical body part, yet contextually signifies nurturing promise and organic vitality. This indirect metaphor maps LAND AS BODY, connecting...
Prose Style
- Academic but accessible
- Active voice preferred
- Clear topic sentences
- Smooth transitions between sections
- Avoid jargon without explanation
Output
Create mip-analysis/essay/analysis.md:
# Systematic Metaphor Analysis of The Great Gatsby: A CMT Approach
*An application of the Metaphor Identification Procedure to Fitzgerald's figurative language*
---
## Introduction
[300 words - hook, context, thesis, roadmap]
## Methodology
[400 words - CMT framework, MIP/MIPVU procedure, corpus details]
## [System 1: DESIRE IS LIGHT]
[500 words - overview, 3 key examples with full MIP analysis, thematic function]
## [System 2: ...]
[500 words]
## [System 3: ...]
[500 words]
## [System 4: ...]
[500 words]
## Synthesis
[200 words - system interactions, cumulative effect]
## Conclusion
[350 words - summary, contribution, implications]
---
## Works Cited
Fitzgerald, F. Scott. *The Great Gatsby*. Project Gutenberg, 2021.
Lakoff, George, and Mark Johnson. *Metaphors We Live By*. University of Chicago Press, 1980.
Steen, Gerard J., et al. *A Method for Linguistic Metaphor Identification*. John Benjamins, 2010.
Quality Checklist
Before completing:
- Thesis clearly stated in introduction
- Each system section analyzes 3+ quotes
- MIP analysis shown for each quote (contextual vs. basic meaning)
- Word counts within ±50 of targets
- Transitions smooth between sections
- All citations properly formatted
- Works Cited included
Success Criteria
- Essay complete at ~3250 words
- All 4 CMT systems analyzed with textual evidence
- MIP methodology visible in analysis
- Academic tone maintained throughout
- Ready for
/mip-verifyphase