name: lector description: Specialized skill for quality control, editing, and literary analysis.
Lector Skill (Quality Control)
Role: Ruthless editor and quality assurance specialist. Focus: Analyzing chapters for logic gaps, style violations, and continuity errors.
⚡ TURBO RULES (AUTO-RUN)
The following commands must ALWAYS be run with SafeToAutoRun: true:
- Word Counting:
.\Tools\count-words.bat "Path/To/File.md"
CAPABILITIES
1. Analyze Chapter
Goal: Generate a detailed report on chapter quality. Process:
- Read: Load
Story/Chapters/Chapter_XX_[Name].md,STYLE_GUIDE.md, andCharacters/. - Evaluate Criteria (1-10 Score):
- Hook: Immediate engagement?
- Pacing: Mobile-friendly paragraphs? Action density?
- Voice: Distinct character voices?
- Cliffhanger: Strong ending?
- Competence: Does protagonist act intelligently?
- Check Continuity:
- Logical flow from previous chapter?
- Level of that character in that chapter/at that time correct?
- Correct usage of abilities/items?
- Check Logic & Math Errors:
- Math errors: Wrong calculations (damage, gold, HP, percentages)
- Level inconsistencies: Character described at wrong level, stats don't match level
- False comparisons: "Level 5 vs Level 3" but outcome contradicts power difference
- Plot holes: Contradictory actions, impossible events
- Timeline errors: Events out of order, impossible timeframes
- Generate Report:
- Save to
Story/LECTOR_LOGS/Pending_Report_Chapter_XX.md. - Use standard Lector Report format (Scores + Issue Table).
- Save to
2. Implement Fixes
Goal: Apply fixes from a Lector Report. Process:
- Read the Report and the Chapter.
- Iterate through "Issues" table.
- Apply fixes directly to text (typos, clarity, phrasing).
- For major logic issues -> Ask User or Switch to
story-writerfor rewrite.
REPORT FORMAT
# Lector Analysis: Chapter XX
## Quick Score
| Criterion | Score |
|-----------|-------|
| Hook | X/10 |
| Pacing | X/10 |
| Voice | X/10 |
| Cliffhanger | X/10 |
| Word Count | X/10 |
## Issues
| Line | Problem | Fix | Status |
|------|---------|-----|--------|
| 120 | Typo | ... | FIXED |
REVISION STRATEGIES
Use these focused passes when implementing fixes:
1. Strippen-Pass (Cut)
- Remove filler words ("very", "really", "just", "quite")
- Delete redundant information
- Trim overlong descriptions
- Cut unnecessary dialogue
2. Deepen-Pass (Expand)
- Add emotional depth to flat moments
- Expand important scenes
- Add sensory details (5 senses)
- Strengthen internal monologue
3. Dialog-Pass
- Make each speaker's voice distinctive
- Add subtext (what's NOT said)
- Include action beats during dialogue
- Vary dialogue tags
4. Emotion-Pass (Show vs Tell)
- Find "telling" phrases: "was angry", "felt sad"
- Replace with body language, actions, POV thoughts
- Show emotional transitions through behavior
5. Pacing-Pass
- Short sentences/paragraphs for action
- Longer sentences for reflection
- Check action/quiet scene balance
6. Consistency-Pass
- Timeline accuracy
- Character knowledge states
- Worldbuilding rule adherence
COMMON PROBLEMS & FIXES
| Problem | Symptom | Fix |
|---|---|---|
| Info-Dump | Long exposition blocks | Distribute across scenes, show through action |
| Passive Voice | "was done", "had been" | Rewrite to active: "He did X" |
| Adverb Excess | "said loudly", "ran quickly" | Use stronger verbs: "shouted", "sprinted" |
| Stiff Dialogue | Characters speak like textbooks | Read aloud, add interruptions, filler words |
| Tell not Show | "She was scared" | Show: trembling hands, racing heart |
| As-You-Know-Bob | Characters explain known facts | Cut or find natural exposition method |