name: reviewing-article description: "Multi-pass article review covering logic, evidence, flow, and polish. Systematic quality assurance before publication."
Reviewing Articles
Overview
Systematic multi-pass review process to ensure article quality. Each pass focuses on one dimension, making issues easier to spot and fix.
Announce at start: "I'm using the reviewing-article skill for systematic review."
Context: You should have a complete draft from executing-article-plan.
Save outputs to:
- Review log:
docs/writing/YYYY-MM-DD-<topic>-review.md - Final article:
docs/writing/YYYY-MM-DD-<topic>-final.md
Four-Pass Review Process
digraph review {
"Read full draft" [shape=box];
"Pass 1: Logic" [shape=box];
"Pass 2: Evidence" [shape=box];
"Pass 3: Flow" [shape=box];
"Pass 4: Polish" [shape=box];
"Generate review log" [shape=box];
"Apply fixes" [shape=box];
"Save final article" [shape=doublecircle];
"Read full draft" -> "Pass 1: Logic";
"Pass 1: Logic" -> "Pass 2: Evidence";
"Pass 2: Evidence" -> "Pass 3: Flow";
"Pass 3: Flow" -> "Pass 4: Polish";
"Pass 4: Polish" -> "Generate review log";
"Generate review log" -> "Apply fixes";
"Apply fixes" -> "Save final article";
}
Pass 1: Logic Check
Focus: Is the argument coherent and sound?
Questions to ask:
- Does the introduction clearly state the core message?
- Does each section support the core message?
- Do conclusions follow logically from premises?
- Are there any logical fallacies?
- Are there contradictions between sections?
- Does the conclusion tie everything together?
Common issues:
- Thesis buried or unclear
- Sections don't support main argument
- Circular reasoning
- Non-sequiturs
- Contradictory claims
Log format:
### Pass 1: Logic Check
**Issues Found:**
**[CRITICAL]** Section 3, paragraph 2
- **Issue:** Conclusion doesn't follow from premise
- **Current:** "X is true, therefore Y must be false"
- **Problem:** X and Y aren't mutually exclusive
- **Fix:** Revise to show relationship between X and Y
**[MINOR]** Introduction
- **Issue:** Core message not explicit enough
- **Fix:** Add clear thesis statement at end of intro
**Strengths:**
- Section 2 builds argument methodically
- Transitions between sections are logical
Pass 2: Evidence Check
Focus: Are claims properly supported?
Questions to ask:
- Does every claim have supporting evidence?
- Are sources credible and recent?
- Are statistics used correctly?
- Are examples relevant and compelling?
- Are quotes accurate and in context?
- Is the evidence sufficient for the claim?
Common issues:
- Unsupported assertions
- Outdated statistics
- Cherry-picked data
- Misused quotes
- Weak examples
- Missing citations
Log format:
### Pass 2: Evidence Check
**Issues Found:**
**[CRITICAL]** Section 2, paragraph 3
- **Issue:** Statistic lacks source
- **Current:** "75% of users prefer..."
- **Problem:** No citation provided
- **Fix:** Add source or remove claim
**[MODERATE]** Section 4
- **Issue:** Example doesn't support point
- **Current:** Using smartphone example to illustrate enterprise software point
- **Fix:** Find relevant B2B example
**Evidence Gaps:**
- [ ] Section 1 needs concrete example of problem
- [ ] Section 3 claim about ROI needs data
**Strengths:**
- Section 2 uses case study effectively
- Research throughout is well-integrated
Pass 3: Flow Check
Focus: Does the article read smoothly?
Questions to ask:
- Do paragraphs flow within sections?
- Are transitions between sections smooth?
- Is pacing appropriate? (not rushed/dragging)
- Do sentence lengths vary?
- Is paragraph length appropriate? (2-4 sentences)
- Does the reading experience feel natural?
Common issues:
- Abrupt topic changes
- Repetitive sentence structures
- Overly long paragraphs
- Missing transitions
- Pacing issues (too slow or too fast)
Log format:
### Pass 3: Flow Check
**Issues Found:**
**[MODERATE]** Section 2 → Section 3 transition
- **Issue:** Jarring topic shift
- **Current:** Section 2 ends on implementation, Section 3 starts on strategy
- **Fix:** Add transition sentence bridging tactical → strategic
**[MINOR]** Section 1, paragraphs 2-5
- **Issue:** All paragraphs same length (3 sentences, similar structure)
- **Fix:** Vary paragraph length and structure
**Pacing Notes:**
- Introduction moves too slowly (3 paragraphs before thesis)
- Section 3 rushes through important concepts
- Conclusion feels abrupt
**Strengths:**
- Overall arc is clear
- Section 2 has excellent paragraph flow
Pass 4: Polish
Focus: Grammar, spelling, formatting, style
Questions to ask:
- Any grammar/spelling errors?
- Is formatting consistent? (headers, lists, emphasis)
- Is tone consistent throughout?
- Are there unnecessary words? (very, really, just)
- Active voice used where appropriate?
- Are sentences clear and concise?
Common issues:
- Typos and grammar errors
- Inconsistent formatting
- Passive voice overuse
- Wordy sentences
- Filler words
- Style inconsistencies
Log format:
### Pass 4: Polish
**Issues Found:**
**[MINOR]** Throughout
- 12 instances of passive voice (see marked locations)
- Inconsistent use of Oxford comma
- "Very" used 8 times (remove or strengthen word)
**Formatting:**
- Section headers: inconsistent capitalization
- Lists: mix of periods and no periods
- Code blocks: need consistent syntax highlighting
**Word Count:**
- Current: 1247 words
- Target: 1200 words
- Overrun: 47 words (4%)
- Action: Acceptable, or trim in conclusion
**Strengths:**
- Clean, professional language
- Good use of subheaders for scannability
- Technical terms explained clearly
Review Log Template
# [Article Title] - Review Log
**Date:** YYYY-MM-DD
**Reviewer:** [Your name/role]
**Draft Version:** YYYY-MM-DD-<topic>-draft.md
**Review Duration:** [time spent]
---
## Executive Summary
**Overall Assessment:** [Excellent/Good/Needs Work/Major Revision Needed]
**Critical Issues:** [count]
**Moderate Issues:** [count]
**Minor Issues:** [count]
**Estimated Fix Time:** [hours/minutes]
**Recommendation:** [Ready to publish / Needs minor fixes / Needs revision / Needs rewrite]
---
## Pass 1: Logic Check
[Details...]
## Pass 2: Evidence Check
[Details...]
## Pass 3: Flow Check
[Details...]
## Pass 4: Polish
[Details...]
---
## Priority Fix List
### Must Fix Before Publishing
1. [Issue with location and fix]
2. [Issue with location and fix]
### Should Fix (Improves Quality)
1. [Issue with location and fix]
2. [Issue with location and fix]
### Nice to Have (Optional)
1. [Issue with location and fix]
---
## Strengths to Preserve
- [What works well - don't change these]
- [Particularly effective sections/arguments]
---
## Final Checklist
- [ ] All critical issues fixed
- [ ] All moderate issues addressed or documented as accepted
- [ ] Word count within acceptable range
- [ ] Formatting consistent
- [ ] Links/references verified
- [ ] Read-through for final polish
Applying Fixes
After generating review log:
- Present review summary to user
- For each critical issue:
- Show current text
- Explain problem
- Propose fix
- Get approval
- Batch minor/moderate fixes (unless user wants granular control)
- Make changes to draft
- Save as final version
Final Article Format
---
title: [Article Title]
date: YYYY-MM-DD
status: final
word_count: XXXX
reviewed: true
review_date: YYYY-MM-DD
---
# [Article Title]
[Final polished content...]
---
## Metadata
- **Word Count:** XXXX
- **Reading Time:** ~X minutes
- **Target Audience:** [from brief]
- **Core Message:** [one sentence]
- **Published:** [where/when]
Review Quality Standards
Good review:
- Finds real issues, not nitpicks
- Categorizes by severity accurately
- Provides actionable fixes
- Preserves what works well
- Balances critique with recognition
Warning signs:
- Only surface-level issues found
- Contradictory feedback
- Vague "make it better" notes
- Excessive nitpicking
- Missing critical logic flaws
Completion
After saving final article:
**"Review complete! 📝
Review Summary:
- Critical issues: [X] → Fixed
- Moderate issues: [X] → Fixed
- Minor issues: [X] → Fixed
Final article saved to: docs/writing/YYYY-MM-DD-<topic>-final.md
Review log saved to: docs/writing/YYYY-MM-DD-<topic>-review.md
Article stats:
- Word count: XXXX
- Reading time: ~X minutes
- Status: Ready for publication
Would you like me to:
- Export to specific format (Medium, WordPress, etc.)
- Generate social media snippets
- Create summary/abstract
- Something else"**
Key Principles
- Four separate passes - Don't mix concerns
- Severity matters - Critical blocks publication, minor doesn't
- Document everything - Review log is valuable reference
- Fix systematically - Don't ad-hoc it
- Preserve strengths - Don't over-edit what works
- Evidence-based critique - Point to specific issues, not feelings